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Re: TEXT: xislu mu'ucutci (roller skating))
Colin Fine says
> of the selbri that that sumti fills. You have consistently used
> SE words for FA words.
I realized this soon after posting. What I have consistently done is only
proofread once, and that a short time after writing, as if I was writing
in a language I knew well enough to notice these things by translating.
> I don't know what you intended by 'le be klaji zo'e'. It's not grammatical.
> I would use 'fo lo vrici' rather than 'cenba'.
This is in the 'route' argument place for klama. I meant say "unspecified
street". Perhaps le klaji be fa zo'e. I wanted to explicitly state that
I wasn't specifying the street.
> To me 'lo zarci' reads oddly, because you have a specific one in mind;
> it's not wrong though.
This is probably malglico . I was not saying "the store on..." but "a store
.i la pi'e seisni cu datnyvau dei .i mi troci
.i le rab. braedig. cmene mi mi .i zoi samymri. firstname.lastname@example.org samymri.