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Re: TEXT: pemci
- Subject: Re: TEXT: pemci
- From: Logical Language Group <lojbab>
- Date: Thu, 1 Dec 1994 17:36:12 -0500 (EST)
- Cc: lojbab@access.digex.net (Logical Language Group)
- In-Reply-To: <199412010342.AA18537@nfs1.digex.net> from "ucleaar" at Dec 1, 94 01:37:05 am
> lo ni fa le vi nanmu cu pinji
> vau bancu le lakne zei linji
> .i zmabra .i gohu
> cu mukti .oirohu
> le spepli be lo cmadesminji
In addition to the bugs pointed out by Goran, I would add that "go'u" is
no sumti; you want "le nu go'u" or maybe "de'u" (so either meter or rhyme
is lost). Otherwise the poem isn't grammatical.
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e'osai ko sarji la lojban.